Ganked from anactoria, for a change

[keevacaereni]

Pick a paragraph (or any passage less than 500 words) from any fanfic I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the characters' heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

Comments

[taekarado.livejournal.com]

The human gasps in a breath, though whether through oxygen deprivation or stimulation, he doesn't know. He cannot determine the cause without further evidence, and without a cause he cannot establish the best way to achieve his goal. There is something ironic about using pleasure to destroy his foe. The incongruousness of it amuses him.

[keevacaereni.livejournal.com]

I didn't really know if I could write Mechakara, especially with sex involved. I figure he'd like the irony of it. And he seems to be pretty thorough, in figuring out how to kill people.