emeriin, I really need to stop stealing memes from you

[keevacaereni]

Give me the title of a story I've never written (in a fandom that you know I can write in), and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.

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[nombrehetomado.livejournal.com]

Hey, you! I particularly enjoyed the part of the smutfest that was "Enemy at the Gate" when the Beekeeper realized how sadistic the Gatecleaner was.

emeriin, I really need to stop stealing memes from you

[emeriin.livejournal.com]

I've gotta say, while it was all great smut, I especially loved the part where Spoony was riding the Critic like a pony in "The Night Before".