Ganked from anactoria, for a change

[keevacaereni]

Pick a paragraph (or any passage less than 500 words) from any fanfic I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the characters' heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

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[keevacaereni.livejournal.com]

I wanted to do something interesting with Nella, because Em hadn't decided what was going on with her in the H!V, and her absence read suspiciously to me. Once I hit on her being Chick's pimp, it became just how awesome and scary I could make her. I thought she'd like easy to explain, blunt weapons. More pain, less chance of being picked up by the bobbies. And no one gets to hurt Chick but her, dammit.

[cysfics.livejournal.com]

I really love this interpretation. It's so... deliciously manipulative.